radically revising poems

hey guys,

i normally don’t believe in the editing process, but wow i just got such a kick out of revising two of my poems that are required to be revised for my final portfolio.  i totally tore them apart and “radically revised” them.  it was awesome.  i’m trying to show more than tell, and i kept the same essence behind the poem – like the emotion and sentiment behind it, but i told it in such a different style.  a much more active style.  hopefully, it makes the poems more gripping to the reader too.

yeeeeeeeeuh,

Cordy

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